DJJ-asshole's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Duck Season]

Nice Jarl

For all of you out there, Jarl is a classmate of mine and you need to understand that this is not a Flash animation, so stuff works differently than you'd expect.

As for the comments that says the movie's not finished, it certainly is.

Maybe you feel that way because it doesn't have a preloader or a proper stop at the end. But that's because he isn't into Flash animation. And another reason is because it's short. But mind you, it's a real handdrawn animation, and it's 40 seconds, which is quite long. Unlike Flash, you can't tween stuff irl, and re-use older graphics.

As for my review, I guess there are still few flaws (which you probably know of). Like the scene with the fisheye, the wagon seems a bit strange.

Maybe you could've spent more attention to the little details, like making the background of your SWF black, so these little whiners wouldn't give you such a low score. Anyhow, if you're planning to upload another movie, ask me and I'll help you out with the actionscripts (like adding a loading bar etc.).

estheban-the-great responds:

thanx for all the great responses and about the movie bieng to short i admit that it would have been better if could show somme more but this is a shool project so i had a deadline and at the end i didn't really liked the movie so mutch so yeah it isn't as good as i hoped it would be but i'm allready thinking about my next one witsh will take half a year but thanx again these comment are a real moral boost
@JaccoNL i'm actualy from belgium but close enough
@DJJ-asshole i'd like to hear what it is that you think is rong whit the fisheye scene?

[A Nogfish Short #1]

Great

Ah, the good old Pokémon days. I like your style of animating, it's so fluent. Too bad it's too short, that's minus 1 for your overall.

Nogfish responds:

Thank you for the compliment

and

Yeah yeah I know, its way short, but thats just the way it is. I think it stands alright by itself...

[Metroid Collab]

Did you know there already was a Metroid collab?

... And it's made by me. Apart from that, I want to rate your work. This collab is really bad. I don't want to insult you, I'm here to critize your flash. The drawings were sub par, the gun sounds were really lame, and some animations actually make me laugh. That's a 3 for humor for you.
Also, I'm strongly against the fact that all the authors (besides you), doesn't have another flashmovie. How can you participate in a collab if you don't have any experience? Yes, I know some were blammed, but that's the whole point....

I definately know that you guys can do better.... Samus wasn't even recognizable in some scenes. If hope you guys learned from your mistakes, and you'd better start making a new, and better flash.

Good luck.

DarkZ3phyr responds:

Yes, we realised that there was another metroid collab... halfway through making this XD

Yes, I agree that the fact that most of us don't have another flash movie does seem kind of unreasonable, but this was made for people to have a go at collaborating with others.

And yeah, most of us CAN do better now.

Thanks for the review!

[-Trick-]

Even though you're a friend

... I have to review honestly. You can only learn from your mistakes, then improve.

I liked this flash really much, it's original, and your style is AWESOME. I gave it a 10!
The bad points are, maybe it's too short? I don't get the plot somehow :(. And the music got a bit annoying after a couple of loops. Still, this is a wonderful flash, I hope it gets an award and frontpage.

Good luck!

Dela responds:

Thanks for the review Jason :3 I'll take it as an 8, as we both know the music could be far improved. Thank you for supporting me! (And showing me stuff :D)

[MengoMango]

My good fellow...

Kleber, you really did outscore yourself. It truly was a surprise when I saw this on the frontpage. Man, it's a good thing that you didn't show it on MSN/ Sheezy, it would've spoiled everything. Good job, you will become very popular one day.

keicho responds:

thanks buddy

[Empire too tall]

Must judge ur flash honestly.

Hi, remember me? U definatly improved since ur Whip & Whop movies (or something like that). The animation was slow so it was rather boring to look at. The music really fits ur movie. I had to give u such a low score. But i voted 5 because i know you ;)

Erkefiende responds:

Yo!

You remembered me.
Hrm hrm "Wipe And Whop". ;)

Nice that you thought the music fit.
And, this movie is really not for everyone.
Yes, the animation is slow, things could have been better.
But it was made to be a little slow.
(actually)


Anyways, Thank you!

(This is not the last you´ve seen from me, I´ll come back, with even a more confusing movie ;D)

[Wonchop's Halloween 05]

Good job my pal

Nicely done, really.I like ur new style, but what's the difference?I'm amazed how many works u can deliver in a week :P

Wonchop responds:

hehe

[Say Dammit!]

Damn it :)

Wow, can't stop watching this, this is my 5th time ^^
It's funny as hell, and pretty original too!U should thank Rose for that!

Wonchop responds:

Wether teaching kids to curse or whupping the frech (you heard me), Rose is Queen!

[Mario: Fishy Water]

kewl

i think the ass idea was kewl, but ur flash is pretty short :(
But i'm sure your Metroid:Invasion will pwn!

ch33ks responds:

It will be much much longer. Thanks for the review.

[Majin Vegetto: Episode 4]

great!

Don't know if it's real about that tracing thing, but even it is true, this takes much time to make it.... Nice work

Majin-Ryan responds:

thanks man, it isnt traced but i watched episodes and clips to see how i could improve on the fights and i have used some fights i can admit that but i didnt draw around them, thats what tracing is, this was not drawn around any pics nor will it ever be